congrats on being done. and overall a nice and well documented project.
but whats up with the arbitrary fetishized hyper articulation? Those structural ribs are perverse. the front and back of the model are like 2 different species.
PERVERSE!
My suggestion to you is as follows: edit. That trendy wood assymetric fashion-following front elevation does nothing to convey the spatial ideas the top section drawing potentially conveys about "hanging" volumes of program from a structural frame. You are constructing a visual narrative. Make ALL your drawings into a beautifully articulate fiction about hanging and stuffing volumes into that bold frame. Never again make soemthing as unendingly boringly flat as the first 3 levels of the front elevation. WEAVE in the future. Let the volumes slip past each other- both laterally and in verticality/ height.
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quite nice. Would have been nice to see a floor plan showing the street and site (but I'm sure you did that)
hmmm, thanks for uh, sharing that with us.
congrats on being done. and overall a nice and well documented project.
but whats up with the arbitrary fetishized hyper articulation? Those structural ribs are perverse. the front and back of the model are like 2 different species.
PERVERSE!
My suggestion to you is as follows: edit. That trendy wood assymetric fashion-following front elevation does nothing to convey the spatial ideas the top section drawing potentially conveys about "hanging" volumes of program from a structural frame. You are constructing a visual narrative. Make ALL your drawings into a beautifully articulate fiction about hanging and stuffing volumes into that bold frame. Never again make soemthing as unendingly boringly flat as the first 3 levels of the front elevation. WEAVE in the future. Let the volumes slip past each other- both laterally and in verticality/ height.
Without a guiding thesis you are lost.
i think it wants to be about HANGING.
good stuff!
a little voice in my head tell me the bottom part of the elevation should be at the top, and reverse.
but then again, this is the last thing you want to hear now, so don't listen to us, enjoy the moment!
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