I think my biggest problem with it is the text... on the 2nd page you have it full justified and it's just killing the tracking in the text and it seems you full justified throughout. I would just get rid of the full justify because the resulting large gaps of spacing are distracting. Also, the descriptions for the projects, get rid of the 2 column thing you have and just keep one column, the columns are way too thin to fit in two, and with the full justify you're getting lines where you only have 3 words in them.

The type setting in this is just awful. I can't even comment more on the remainder of the portfolio because it's so hard to read. Hyphenating a title instead of just making it two lines? Seriously?

Avant Garde deserves better treatment than this.

Please take the time to do a google search for "Avant Garde Font" and research the multitude of precedence using this typeface.

Thank you guys, i will definetly look into it.

damn, cherith...

edlcm - your sections are interesting, never seen tree roots in one before!

I take it this is 8.5 by 11 folded in half? I'll throw up an idea.

I like your concept for layout combined with the paper size-- as the dimensional ration is roughly equivalent to one of my favorite paper sizes (narrow broadsheet).

My only other suggestion is to remove your birthday and ethnicity from your CV when applying for jobs in the US (this information is technically illegal).

It's a good body of work but the profolio needs to be way sexier!

haha what do you mean by sexier med., care to explain?

too sexy?

^ yikes!

hah.

Thanks guys, i agree that there are some problems with understanding the text. And unicorn i believe it is too sexy for me haha