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add a period to the url and it works

looks ok.  nice layout and easy to understand. 

downside for me is i find the personal notes about how much you learned from the AA grad and so forth unnecessary and distracting.  larger images and more about the projects themselves with simple explanation of your role would maybe be more convincing.

Projects look interesting enough, but the images are too small, and as will just pointed out there is no legible hierarchy to the page organization.  Make it more about the projects.

Looks good.

Detail drawings are a little small though.

ditch the smiley face at the end.. ha ha.

I like it, though I'd suggest a few things: some images can be larger, correct the numerous spelling errors, and remove the smiley face. Maybe replace the smiley face with a ^_____^. Overall it is refreshingly modest and formatted well. 

Could not find edit option for my initial post... heres the new link:

http://issuu.com/ctdezn/docs/twenty_two_1.2

(updated version with spelling fixes & small changes. removed smiley face... I really appreciate all these swift feedbacks!)

Re: Will, Lackey, LayingOutTheDots* & rza,

Thank you for the comments regarding incorporating larger images and focusing more on the projects itself. I wasn't sure about all this so I just tried to balance each project with a simple descriptions/renderings & some samples of work I did on each project.

I am to do a big update addressing these 2 issues for my next version.

Thanks again for your time :)

*aim - seriously where is the edit button...!