Get rid of that self-rated software skill graph... it's dumb and irrelevant.  Let the employer decide, by looking at the images, if your software chops are good enough.  Those section drawings... specially the one awkwardly straddling the gutter on pages 8-9 needs lots of love to make visually pleasant... def not a 5 out 5 in illustrator and photoshop skills if you bring a folio like that. 

What's also missing is progress work and dirty napkin sketches.  Show some of your thought process and ability to draw/sketch/think through a design.  Everyone can press the little tea kettle icon and shit-out the same renderings.  Where's the funk? Where's what makes you special?

Drawings need better lineweights and hierarchy, doesn’t look like professional work.

always with the fucking headshots