Ditto with @larchinect. This all looks like first year undergrad work. What, exactly, is your objective? It's not bad, but is it for school, a job, a contest, or a scholarship?
I'm with the comments above. This is one of the strangest portfolios I have seen in a while. The graphic design is pretty abysmal, and the drawings don't make much sense without any context.
On the other hand, the models are lovely.... which is also really confusing because I don't understand how those fit into whatever you are doing with the other projects.
Portfolio Critique
Looking for some input on a portfolio I put together of my work so far in school.
http://issuu.com/jcoates22/docs/coates_portfolio_web
Thanks
no sketches? what did you do on each of these and why? what is the program? objective? constraints? who are you?...
Ditto with @larchinect. This all looks like first year undergrad work. What, exactly, is your objective? It's not bad, but is it for school, a job, a contest, or a scholarship?
25 pages longer than what the content should allow.
I'm with the comments above. This is one of the strangest portfolios I have seen in a while. The graphic design is pretty abysmal, and the drawings don't make much sense without any context.
On the other hand, the models are lovely.... which is also really confusing because I don't understand how those fit into whatever you are doing with the other projects.
Were they done for a firm or something?
My objective is to summarize the following journal for school. This is still very much a work in progress so thanks for the input.
http://issuu.com/jcoates22/docs/coates_studio_journal
Also the models where built for a firm that I worked at several years ago.
those drawings need some serious TLC.
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