It's a very nice project with some strong images. Leagues better than your website link for sure.
However, you can get all the information and drawings on two pages instead of one because right now it's too cluttered and there isn't enough variation in scale.
You should take two of the strongest images like the renderings and use each one as your money shot for each page. That way you can make them bigger and then all the other stuff can be smaller.
Portfolio sample
Here is an improved version of a recently posted portfolio sample. I intend to send this to potential employers:
http://issuu.com/lewisbailie/docs/portfolio-1_improved
Your thoughts?
Thanks again..
It's a very nice project with some strong images. Leagues better than your website link for sure.
However, you can get all the information and drawings on two pages instead of one because right now it's too cluttered and there isn't enough variation in scale.
You should take two of the strongest images like the renderings and use each one as your money shot for each page. That way you can make them bigger and then all the other stuff can be smaller.
Thanks for your comments med. I can see your point..
You have text of "site plan" in the middle of the group of children but it looks really good I hope mine will come out OK!
Thanks shimmyshaw. I just corrected that!
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Trace, sorry, you can see it here:
http://issuu.com/lewisbailie/docs/portfolio-1_improved-b
I had modified it. Thanks.
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