Quick background:
23-year old Japanese-American born in Boston, raised in NY/Connecticut, high school in Utah, last 4~5 years doing a liberal arts undergraduate degree at Waseda in Tokyo.
GPA is around 3.8, GRE (took it last Monday, Verbal 610, Math 710; no writing in yet).
I've taken some architecture related courses such as:
Intro to arch (palladius/la la la)
Modern Arch (futurism/constructivism/people with round black frame glasses)
Special Topics in Design and Architecture: Tokyo
Urban Studies (LeFebvre/Walter Benjamin/Georg Simmel/Lewis Mumford)
buuut my main passion was/is literature. Reading Mishima Yukio/Osamu Dazai/Hemingway/Henry Miller and others. I do not want to study books as I hate what academics do to them.
I am currently applying to top-tier schools and am a bit lost as to what to focus on in my portfolio. I had been planning on using photography as my main mode of visual expression; however this seems to not be accepted (or at least not mentioned) on almost every admissions page I've looked at. By photography I mean photos that I have taken of places/spaces around me, which I have had no part in designing. I've taught myself analog/film photography over my 4 years in Tokyo, and these are what I've produced, using a hasselblad 6x6cm camera, which I recently just sold to move up to a Sinar 4x5 system with 90/180/250mm lenses. My point is I take/took photography seriously as a medium for visual expression and I would feel pretty naked producing a portfolio without it.
Before I started photography I was a stereotypical asian-american who excelled at academic pursuits and had no interest in visual arts. Since then I've done something of a 180 and despise academia and love all things beautiful.
Finally: regarding my statement, I have an idea of what I want to study during my 3-years. Of course I am familiar with Le Corbusier's "Machine for living" quote - I want to turn this on its head and make machines for dieing. I view the obsession with life as an unhealthy one, which prevents people from living full ones. I do not like what is easy, I think people misinterpret the point of design's "better life through design" to be "easier life through design" which I do not see to be the same thing.
My question is, is this normal to put these ideas into a personal statement? I do not want to come off as an idealogue (that part of me died in high school with my che t-shirts) and so I was thinking of mentioning what I view to be my strength: a strong background in literature, with some dabbling in visual arts, and an idea of a philosophy which I would like to implement via architecture.
Finally, I had a baby two weeks ago (October 26th) and have been working in a mind-numbing job teaching English to support myself and new wife while finishing my degree. Would this be relevant to a personal statement? I believe it shows I have character to do things that are not easy but which I believe in, but maybe they'll just think I need more education with regards to birth control.
Portfolio - I'd just go for variety. Photos look good, sketches don't look bad, probably skip that graphic design (bottom looked fine, logo looks a little confusing)
Go for quality, too. You don't need a ton of photos or sketches or anything, just add the best.
Statement - dunno. I agree with your idea, but not sure if it is too specific for an intro paragraph. I'd probably keep it safe and blab some general passion, your interests, etc., maybe with a quick reference.
It sounds more like what you would do your thesis on or a project.
I wouldn't put emphasis on having a kid. Again, you can toss it in, but I don't think you get points for or against - that's just your personal life that some will look at as "he won't have enough time" others might say "good for him for not sleeping at all", etc.
Some of your photographs are def. amazing. Just be really picky and only put your very best photos in. I think photography can be especially difficult in portfolios, just because it's so easy to point and shoot with a camera -- anyone can do it and put crappy photos in their portfolio. Many people don't understand that photography is an art in itself, and it takes years to hone your craft. But I really like your photos, definitely include some of them.
I also would not include the graphic design. I also like your conceptual sketches (like the first one) more than the fully-fleshed ones.
As far as your personal statement goes, I think schools understand that you're coming from an non-arch background, and they want to see why you want to go into architecture. IMO, a generic statement about architecture is not the way to go. Maybe you don't have to make the whole thing about your about your idea, but I say include it -- it shows that you've been thinking about architecture and why you want to do it. Grad schools don't expect non-arch students to have fully-formed theories/conclusions about architecture, and yours will probably change over the next three years anyway, but being different is a good thing in your apps; you want to stand out.
anyway, hope it helps, but what do I know, I'm going through this whole process too.
As I stated before, call the schools to which you are applying and ask the questions about what they look for in the application materials.
Also, visit Portfolio Design -- www.portfoliodesign.com -- for ideas of "designing" your portfolio. You can include photos, but do not do so exclusively. Schools will want to see sketches, drawings, etc.
As for the personal statement, I would not mention your pregnancy - it is not relevant. Focus on who you are and who you wish to become and how the program can help you achieve it.
Man. Forget Architecture. Really. Get a fine arts degree. I don't know you, but literature and photography = creative work. Architecture is boring technical work. What about a creative agency / Creative Director? Don't waste your time learning AutoCad. Take drawing classes. Good Luck!
trace: Southwest, New Haven/Greenwich, basically across the border from Weschester county.
landshark: thanks for the boost of confidence, will lean towards a critical stance when it comes to selection of what I include.
Dr.: neat link, thanks.
adamk: I agree with you, but I'm of the opinion that artists don't go to school to become artists. I don't like Vonnegut anymore, but a quote I like is, "Good writers don't go to school to become writers, they are passionate about something, and write about it." Liberal arts education is something of a jerk-off, but in the end I am glad I went, read, and developed a perspective. Architecture, as unstable as it can be, seemed like a good balance of something not so tedious and something that (has the potential) to put a little food on the table.
To everyone: Thanks for the advice.
I've taken some time off work in order to better prepare my portfolio, and I have a question regarding process/system.
For the photography section I am going to include, does it make sense to include earlier photos from 4 years ago when I started photography? I keep reading that you should only include your best best best work, and cut all the rest, however I am having trouble coming up with ways to show process for photography. I would like to show my aesthetic sense developed, refined, but to do so I think I need to show some sort of timeline.
I guess that answers my own question, to incorporate some sort of indication of time/chronology in the photos.
Also playing with scraps/contact sheets perhaps.
If you have any other thoughts its appreciated, but I just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to reply.
don't show crappy old work to show process. showing amazing old work is ok though.
being creative with process is cool. like you say, by showing how you went through contact sheets or otherwise arrived at final image. could be interesting if you can make a nice design (not easy).
other examples of portfolios can be found for free at lulu.com if you need some inspiration...
worst case scenario enroll in one of the esteemed summer programs at columbia or harvard or other similar places and get some architecture to put in there... although that's probably not necessary.
I got into architecture schools with a portfolio that was mostly photography with some graphic and exhibition design, and a minimal amount of hand drawing. However - i have a graphic design degree, and worked professionally as a photographer in the 2 years before I applied.
I agree with the others - weed through your photos, use the sketches (and produce more in between now and due dates), and drop that graphic design like a hot potato.
For the statement - schools basically seem to want
a) why you want to study architecture (what offer to contribute to the school and to the profession)
b) why you want to study architecture at that particular school (why they, specifically, are the best people and place to help you achieve a.)
Just clarify that stuff.
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Portfolio/Statement advice (MArch non-arch undergrad)
Quick background:
23-year old Japanese-American born in Boston, raised in NY/Connecticut, high school in Utah, last 4~5 years doing a liberal arts undergraduate degree at Waseda in Tokyo.
GPA is around 3.8, GRE (took it last Monday, Verbal 610, Math 710; no writing in yet).
I've taken some architecture related courses such as:
Intro to arch (palladius/la la la)
Modern Arch (futurism/constructivism/people with round black frame glasses)
Special Topics in Design and Architecture: Tokyo
Urban Studies (LeFebvre/Walter Benjamin/Georg Simmel/Lewis Mumford)
buuut my main passion was/is literature. Reading Mishima Yukio/Osamu Dazai/Hemingway/Henry Miller and others. I do not want to study books as I hate what academics do to them.
I am currently applying to top-tier schools and am a bit lost as to what to focus on in my portfolio. I had been planning on using photography as my main mode of visual expression; however this seems to not be accepted (or at least not mentioned) on almost every admissions page I've looked at. By photography I mean photos that I have taken of places/spaces around me, which I have had no part in designing. I've taught myself analog/film photography over my 4 years in Tokyo, and these are what I've produced, using a hasselblad 6x6cm camera, which I recently just sold to move up to a Sinar 4x5 system with 90/180/250mm lenses. My point is I take/took photography seriously as a medium for visual expression and I would feel pretty naked producing a portfolio without it.
Before I started photography I was a stereotypical asian-american who excelled at academic pursuits and had no interest in visual arts. Since then I've done something of a 180 and despise academia and love all things beautiful.
Photographs:
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Building-15-4-72688616
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Watanabe-01-72686781
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Kagurazaka-04-72012682
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Kagurazaka-02-72012624
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Building-14-1-72011510
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Building-14-2-72011536
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/can-t-get-you-out-of-my-head-67967430
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/Taiwan-6x6cm-21-67279400
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/kiba26-end-66786569
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/kiba12-66785363
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/kiba01-66783538
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/elementary-52972377
Bad Graphic design:
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/sugoroku-56731785
Bad sketches:
http://musato.deviantart.com/art/4-corners-quot-final-quot-56900732
http://www.flickr.com/photos/alexwatanabe/3009873435/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/alexwatanabe/3009873379/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/alexwatanabe/3009873183/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/alexwatanabe/3010709258/
Finally: regarding my statement, I have an idea of what I want to study during my 3-years. Of course I am familiar with Le Corbusier's "Machine for living" quote - I want to turn this on its head and make machines for dieing. I view the obsession with life as an unhealthy one, which prevents people from living full ones. I do not like what is easy, I think people misinterpret the point of design's "better life through design" to be "easier life through design" which I do not see to be the same thing.
My question is, is this normal to put these ideas into a personal statement? I do not want to come off as an idealogue (that part of me died in high school with my che t-shirts) and so I was thinking of mentioning what I view to be my strength: a strong background in literature, with some dabbling in visual arts, and an idea of a philosophy which I would like to implement via architecture.
Finally, I had a baby two weeks ago (October 26th) and have been working in a mind-numbing job teaching English to support myself and new wife while finishing my degree. Would this be relevant to a personal statement? I believe it shows I have character to do things that are not easy but which I believe in, but maybe they'll just think I need more education with regards to birth control.
Where about in CT? I am from up by UCONN.
Portfolio - I'd just go for variety. Photos look good, sketches don't look bad, probably skip that graphic design (bottom looked fine, logo looks a little confusing)
Go for quality, too. You don't need a ton of photos or sketches or anything, just add the best.
Statement - dunno. I agree with your idea, but not sure if it is too specific for an intro paragraph. I'd probably keep it safe and blab some general passion, your interests, etc., maybe with a quick reference.
It sounds more like what you would do your thesis on or a project.
I wouldn't put emphasis on having a kid. Again, you can toss it in, but I don't think you get points for or against - that's just your personal life that some will look at as "he won't have enough time" others might say "good for him for not sleeping at all", etc.
Good luck.
Some of your photographs are def. amazing. Just be really picky and only put your very best photos in. I think photography can be especially difficult in portfolios, just because it's so easy to point and shoot with a camera -- anyone can do it and put crappy photos in their portfolio. Many people don't understand that photography is an art in itself, and it takes years to hone your craft. But I really like your photos, definitely include some of them.
I also would not include the graphic design. I also like your conceptual sketches (like the first one) more than the fully-fleshed ones.
As far as your personal statement goes, I think schools understand that you're coming from an non-arch background, and they want to see why you want to go into architecture. IMO, a generic statement about architecture is not the way to go. Maybe you don't have to make the whole thing about your about your idea, but I say include it -- it shows that you've been thinking about architecture and why you want to do it. Grad schools don't expect non-arch students to have fully-formed theories/conclusions about architecture, and yours will probably change over the next three years anyway, but being different is a good thing in your apps; you want to stand out.
anyway, hope it helps, but what do I know, I'm going through this whole process too.
As I stated before, call the schools to which you are applying and ask the questions about what they look for in the application materials.
Also, visit Portfolio Design -- www.portfoliodesign.com -- for ideas of "designing" your portfolio. You can include photos, but do not do so exclusively. Schools will want to see sketches, drawings, etc.
As for the personal statement, I would not mention your pregnancy - it is not relevant. Focus on who you are and who you wish to become and how the program can help you achieve it.
Thanks!
Dr. Architecture
www.archcareers.org
Man. Forget Architecture. Really. Get a fine arts degree. I don't know you, but literature and photography = creative work. Architecture is boring technical work. What about a creative agency / Creative Director? Don't waste your time learning AutoCad. Take drawing classes. Good Luck!
trace: Southwest, New Haven/Greenwich, basically across the border from Weschester county.
landshark: thanks for the boost of confidence, will lean towards a critical stance when it comes to selection of what I include.
Dr.: neat link, thanks.
adamk: I agree with you, but I'm of the opinion that artists don't go to school to become artists. I don't like Vonnegut anymore, but a quote I like is, "Good writers don't go to school to become writers, they are passionate about something, and write about it." Liberal arts education is something of a jerk-off, but in the end I am glad I went, read, and developed a perspective. Architecture, as unstable as it can be, seemed like a good balance of something not so tedious and something that (has the potential) to put a little food on the table.
To everyone: Thanks for the advice.
I've taken some time off work in order to better prepare my portfolio, and I have a question regarding process/system.
For the photography section I am going to include, does it make sense to include earlier photos from 4 years ago when I started photography? I keep reading that you should only include your best best best work, and cut all the rest, however I am having trouble coming up with ways to show process for photography. I would like to show my aesthetic sense developed, refined, but to do so I think I need to show some sort of timeline.
I guess that answers my own question, to incorporate some sort of indication of time/chronology in the photos.
Also playing with scraps/contact sheets perhaps.
If you have any other thoughts its appreciated, but I just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to reply.
Good luck.
don't show crappy old work to show process. showing amazing old work is ok though.
being creative with process is cool. like you say, by showing how you went through contact sheets or otherwise arrived at final image. could be interesting if you can make a nice design (not easy).
other examples of portfolios can be found for free at lulu.com if you need some inspiration...
worst case scenario enroll in one of the esteemed summer programs at columbia or harvard or other similar places and get some architecture to put in there... although that's probably not necessary.
I got into architecture schools with a portfolio that was mostly photography with some graphic and exhibition design, and a minimal amount of hand drawing. However - i have a graphic design degree, and worked professionally as a photographer in the 2 years before I applied.
I agree with the others - weed through your photos, use the sketches (and produce more in between now and due dates), and drop that graphic design like a hot potato.
For the statement - schools basically seem to want
a) why you want to study architecture (what offer to contribute to the school and to the profession)
b) why you want to study architecture at that particular school (why they, specifically, are the best people and place to help you achieve a.)
Just clarify that stuff.
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