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Need a critique on drawing technique 2

industrial-landsapedesign

Hello, I would like to say I think this is a great forum. Most people reply to questions honestly and are very helpful. It has been a great way to get advice from people who aren't in my design circle. In the link below I posted a question allong with 2d rendered drawings.

http://archinect.com/forum/thread/52250377/need-a-critique-on-drawing-technique

 

I believe the consensus was that my drawings needed work in terms of lineweight and reading 3 dimensional. I made some changes on an elevation drawing to make it read better, changed the shadows a bit and some lines darker. In your opinion what are the strengths and weaknesses of this updated drawing? What should I add or get rid of to make this read better as a presentation drawing?

 
Jun 27, 12 11:48 pm

in my opinion there isnt just one answer to your question, a 100 people would give you a 100 different answers. looking at other works will help you decide what and how you would like to portray your presentation.

have a look at this website, i found it very useful

http://www.alexhogrefe.com/

Jun 28, 12 2:10 am  · 
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industrial-landsapedesign

Sergei Mikhailenko-holy crap that guy has talent! His style is similar to mine except a lot grittier and more realistic than mine.He also has a great sense of light and shadow. I am starting to learn photo realistic modeling programs, hopefully when I become more experienced with them,I will be able to make drawings that good!

Jun 28, 12 9:44 am  · 
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