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Pratt Institute
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Portfolio Crit, Applying for M-Arch 2
I would love to hear some comments and criticism on my portfolio as it stands now. Any and all comments from you all would be appreciated.
Thanks
http://issuu.com/phil.morroni/docs/phil_morroni_portfolio
a few quick comments...
1. the title pages of your projects lack life.. the blank page with only text next to a full page picture is very out of balance visually. Maybe you could add some sketches/process work here? generally, adding some process work = more interesting portfolio
2. I really dislike the text setup, mainly I think because you are using all caps, which is difficult to read and distracting imo from what they are referring to...
Thanks for the comments. I have never really understood typography and text, maybe I just need to do some more research on it in general. And I think more process information will help. Thanks
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