Why spend 100k or more on an american M.arch when you already have an arch degree?  Also, why would you expect random internet wankers to spend time reviewing your application essay?

Let's just give chat gpt the job.  Here's it's constructive criticism:

"Ah, what a delightfully unique perspective on architecture! Who knew that growing up in a row house could spark such profound insights about central courtyards? The author’s journey through academic exploration and heartfelt travel anecdotes really demonstrates how transformative a degree can be when it’s sprinkled with just the right amount of buzzwords and references to prestigious figures. And let’s not overlook the groundbreaking revelation that architecture impacts mental health—truly a fresh take that’s never been discussed before!"

So you have a B.Arch and want to get an M.Arch?  

May I ask why?  

There are some good reasons to get an M.Arch however, they are rather limited if you already have a B.Arch. 

• You've not going to make more money with an M.Arch. 
• You're not going to be more hirable with an M.Arch. 
• You will be able to teach with an M.Arch. 
• You may learn more in an M.Arch program.
• You may have more networking opportunities in an M.Arch program.