I’ll play / the colour code doesn’t work here , see p10-11  it’s green everywhere! You don’t need colour border or background to make the graphics stand out see p 8-9 ( i would make the exploded axo bigger ) 

Play with small -large scale drawings/renders , draw the attention of the audience to the best detail you want to showcase. G luck

I would limit to 2 pages per project. less text, more drawings.

I don’t love the color scheme approach myself, but I’m a minimalist with such things. I do think the general layout with text and organization is meh. As JLC-1 said, too much text, especially when it’s just like site information.

I don’t feel like commenting on design concepts.

The content is ok. I’d slap most of your drawings/renderings with a fat smack of adobe suite, they need some refinement, especially the renderings. I honestly think you could probably get them to look up to par in just postprocessing though. Being able to photoshop the crap out of something is an important talent for school :)