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Portfolio critique

Alantelias

Hi. Im Alan a 5th year architecture student from Universidad de Buenos Aires (Argentina). Im interested in apply as an intern at big, cobe, and mvrdv.  I need some critique for my portfolio.

https://issuu.com/alantelias/docs/alan_telias_1

pd: Sorry for the spanish, I will translate it soon

 
Feb 29, 16 2:24 pm
MinimalCrazy

Why include a photo in portfolio? Should let the employers judge you by your work. Giving a photo can lead to a possibility of employers being judgmental

pre-9: i cant understand your project through those diagrams

11: composition/layout isn't very good. Plans need detail either hatching or labels

13. lineweights!

15: layout??

Rest is okay.

Are you planning on applying to other firms as well?

p.s: dont take my criticism harshly, im just a student as well, working at one of those firms.

Feb 29, 16 6:45 pm  · 
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Clachecc91

I think your portfolio's great! And if you don't get hired because of your picture, it's only because you are way too beautiful :) Plus that's the Guggenheim, and everybody loves it.

PS: New York suits you

Feb 29, 16 9:03 pm  · 
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Alantelias

Thnak you Minimal Crazy for taking the time to review it. I will try to improve it. Which other firm do you think i should try? Where are you working?

Thank you Clachecc we can go out for a drink some day! jaja

Feb 29, 16 9:57 pm  · 
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