Please feel free to comment. Your ideas and comments are very helpful. The portfolio is a work-in-progress but mainly it's intended for a job / master application.
It's a pretty fabulous portfolio and a fabulous body of work actually.
Considering English is not your mother tongue, I think that the verbage and the project descriptions are well crafted. I noticed some of the paragraphs are still in another language but that's ok.
Suggestions I would make is to put some of the later pages in the start of the portfolio. Pages 20-29 have some amazing imagery that would create a big splash when someone is reviewing it. I would change the order so that those pages come first and the office tower project (which is nice) should come after. The imagery isn't quite as powerful as the later pages.
Thank you! I know I neglected the tower graphics. I shall add more sketches and text to make it more like the other projects, more mixed-up. The thing is the projects are in chronological order because I felt it would show how my abilities improved over time. But I agree, the tower needs work. Actually after I finished it (the tower) in my 5th year I noticed that OMA has a pretty similar project. It's embarrassing I guess and one might think that I copied the design, which I didn't.
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Please feel free to comment. Your ideas and comments are very helpful. The portfolio is a work-in-progress but mainly it's intended for a job / master application.
http://issuu.com/liviu.teodorescu/docs/portfolio_liviu_teodorescu
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It's a pretty fabulous portfolio and a fabulous body of work actually.
Considering English is not your mother tongue, I think that the verbage and the project descriptions are well crafted. I noticed some of the paragraphs are still in another language but that's ok.
Suggestions I would make is to put some of the later pages in the start of the portfolio. Pages 20-29 have some amazing imagery that would create a big splash when someone is reviewing it. I would change the order so that those pages come first and the office tower project (which is nice) should come after. The imagery isn't quite as powerful as the later pages.
Thank you! I know I neglected the tower graphics. I shall add more sketches and text to make it more like the other projects, more mixed-up. The thing is the projects are in chronological order because I felt it would show how my abilities improved over time. But I agree, the tower needs work. Actually after I finished it (the tower) in my 5th year I noticed that OMA has a pretty similar project. It's embarrassing I guess and one might think that I copied the design, which I didn't.
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