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protfolio crit please

yyann

This portfolio is for m.arch application. Any comments would be appreciated.

Thanks!

http://issuu.com/y.x.h./docs/gsappsciarc

 
Nov 4, 12 5:50 pm
Gyo

perfect, nothing to crit

Nov 5, 12 2:00 am  · 
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sandhilldesign

Nice portfolio. Looks polished and there is a consistency throughout. Good bredth of projects. Only critique would be that there are many shorter projects and few longer projects. It would be more revealing of your design abilities and processs to show one project more in depth and in a more detailed format.

Nov 5, 12 12:37 pm  · 
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yyann

sandhilldesign, thank you, I will add more details to lengthen one of the design projects.

Nov 5, 12 9:23 pm  · 
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larslarson

i think you have too many pages of hand drawings...at least for me.  I don't know if this is the requirements for MArch portfolios, but I'd def get rid of about four pages.

I don't think the nudes are as strong as your other work..and def don't deserve four pages.  I like the single line drawings and cityscapes...i think i'd consolidate to about four pages or so though...especially since I think your architecture work is stronger.

Nov 5, 12 11:05 pm  · 
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