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Critique my work-in-process portfolio for m.Arch please
Hey guys,
First post here:
I'd love some feedback on my portfolio so far. I'm applying for a few schools over in the east in the US, as well as a few over here in canada. The last 2 images, I just placed there without showing any diagrams illustrating a process. But just general lay-out and points of intrique would be much appreciated. Thanks!
http://issuu.com/leejonathan87/docs/port1
I think you're on your way, with a clean layout to start. However, the entire spiraly-wood project could easily be distilled down to 2 pages (one spread) while still keeping it easy to digest and understand. I know the last page isn't captioned or explained but unless you're going somewhere REALLY good with it, I might think about dropping it. Just my 2 cents. Keep us up to date!
I'd say it's too long. layout is a bit cluttered for my taste.
I agree with bowling, I would normally expect to see the over a two page spread, not just because of the amount of content, but also to simplify the connection the "process" to the product.
thanks for your input guys!
i'm trying to minimize the amount of work, and really focus on a few individual ones. i also think i shouldn't have put in the last 2 works, as that seems a little distracting for the time being. but yes, i will definitely produce an update.
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