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Feedback Request For Rough Draft Version of Portfolio

Paul A. Zamorano

I would like feedback on my portfolio, I have a liberal arts education and have minimal amount of architecture under my belt. Most of my drawings are hand drawn, including plans, sections, etc.

 

I would like comments to help me improve it, I am planning to apply to M Arch 1 Programs.

http://issuu.com/antgil/docs/portfolio_omega

Thanks

 
Jul 28, 12 9:15 pm
Paul A. Zamorano

Really Rough Draft .

Jul 28, 12 9:16 pm  · 
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1.Add more projects asap

2. Put your hand drawings in photoshop and make them brighter, they are a bit too dark.

Jul 28, 12 9:38 pm  · 
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Paul A. Zamorano

What do you think of layout? I am working on my layout for drawings any suggestions? 

Jul 28, 12 9:48 pm  · 
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RH-Arch

Did you mess up the page dimensions of the pdf? the cover seems landscape letter, but then when you open it it seems 11x17. The sketch on the inside cover needs to be clean up some in photoshop, maybe scaled down to deal with pixellation, or quickly redrawn on trace and scanned in. The vertically offset numbers, e.g "03", should be on the same horizontal plane.  Don't make your charcoal sketches a full page unless they are much more detailed, so I suggest scaling them down (a scaled down drawing looks a lot better than a scaled up one). You should redo your diagrams on the american dormitory to be more graphically appealing instead of appearing like they've been done in word. After stating this, I should ask, do you have access to Adobe Creative Suite, or maybe a friend that knows how to use it?

Jul 28, 12 11:49 pm  · 
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Paul A. Zamorano

@RAnd H

I just realized that the dimension are messed up.  I have a lot of charcoal drawings, do you recommend showing the detail close up? 

Jul 29, 12 11:36 am  · 
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