Hi everyone
This year I graduated so I am looking for a job in the Netherlands. I'd appreciate it if someone can review my portfolio and give me some feedback.
You can view the portfolio via this link: https://issuu.com/jeroen_piels...
Thanks for helping!
The industrial design and furniture piece at the end of you book is interesting. I would keep developing this.
Really like it overall, clean and some captivating images with varities. However, I think you can use 2-3 pages of just one image -full spread or partial spread with just white leftover space. WIll create better rhythm overall.
nice, just keep in mind that one clearly visible image is better than 6 images that are not visible or too cramped on the page.
pg 4-5 too cramped
pg 15-16 small images not visibile for me
also nobody will ever read the text. if you want to keep it bold a few key sentences so the skimmers like me can get the jist without spending 10 min
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Portfolio review
Hi everyone
This year I graduated so I am looking for a job in the Netherlands. I'd appreciate it if someone can review my portfolio and give me some feedback.
You can view the portfolio via this link: https://issuu.com/jeroen_piels...
Thanks for helping!
The industrial design and furniture piece at the end of you book is interesting. I would keep developing this.
Really like it overall, clean and some captivating images with varities. However, I think you can use 2-3 pages of just one image -full spread or partial spread with just white leftover space. WIll create better rhythm overall.
nice, just keep in mind that one clearly visible image is better than 6 images that are not visible or too cramped on the page.
pg 4-5 too cramped
pg 15-16 small images not visibile for me
also nobody will ever read the text. if you want to keep it bold a few key sentences so the skimmers like me can get the jist without spending 10 min
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