need HELP/feedback on portfolio


Hello everyone, I'm in desperate need for some constructive criticism. I'm planning on applying for MArch at some universities in Europe and this is my first attempt at designing my portfolio.

I'm in the process of redesigning some of my old projects and this is what I've got so far, it would be great to know what you guys think I should keep, work more on or completely get rid of. And basically any tips on improving would be amazing.

portfolio attempt 1

Mar 28, 20 11:29 am

Which schools are you applying at? 

Mar 28, 20 1:47 pm  · 

There's a spelling mistake on your CV: SOWTWARES. Also really not a fan of the whole grading your own abilities as it can make you look bad, but it is for a masters application not a job. That said, the page needs a splash of colour like your other spreads and you could make the little dots there coloured.

I like your project layouts, especially the idea hub. I get your first project has a good bit of analysis involved, but it seems too wordy. If you can, displaying it as visuals more might help.

Might want to check the page length requirements of the application, but think it's overall a pretty good first design, cheers

Mar 28, 20 3:31 pm  · 

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