MArch Portfolio Review


Hello everyone,

I would like to ask for your critique on my portfolio. I just completed my graduate thesis and will be applying to a few different schools to get a post-professional masters degree in either sustainable design or urban design. I just added my thesis to my portfolio so I would love to get some feedback from you on how to improve it. 

I am applying to: Ryerson U (Master of Building Science), McGill (Master of Urban Design and Housing), UT Austin (Master of Sustainable Design),  U of Maryland (Master of Sustainable Design), York University (Master of Environmental Science) .

Here is a link to the portfolio: https://fjfdesign.files.wordpr...

Here is a link to my thesis boards:

Also, I am applying to a few jobs as a plan B, how can I edit a version of this for a job application?

Thank you!

Dec 3, 18 5:19 pm

Need's some serious breathing space and less (hot air) balloons:

Dec 4, 18 4:02 am

Thank you! I didn't know about the impact of hot air balloons


It's mostly the regular helium-filled balloons that are causing the ecological havoc (the hot air balloons are just pointless CO2 emitters that somehow everybody and their grandmother wanted to put in their renderings 5 years ago or something ;) )


Haha they are so romantic though... Jk. Thank you for your feedback.
Everything else looks good?


Nice work - Depending on the type of job you're looking for i would add some additional technical drawings, or bring a set with you on your interview. 

Dec 4, 18 2:21 pm

Thank you for the advice! I will plan to bring a set. 

Dec 4, 18 5:40 pm

Also, any advice about those specific post-professional programs would be appreciated. 

Dec 5, 18 1:38 pm


Dec 9, 18 9:35 pm

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