Quite a lot of material in there, not bad bad for a hurried portfolio. Your graphic sense is pretty good so don't be worried about that.

I don't have time to read through everything - at a glance I'd say separate academic work from internship work. Generally the academic work gives a better sense of your interests and thinking as an individual and is more valuable for applying to another university. The internship work is good for showing skills you have, but keep it short and focus on what you specifically contributed.

If you can clean up some of the spreads that are just presentation boards to make them easier to read that would be useful. Also take out some unnecessary material like the team photo on p.18-19 that doesn't explain anything about the work.

Thanks ! I'll do that. But what do you think of the computational And robotics work is that something to make a impression for aa drl / MIT sMarch ? I tried to put all the computational work first and then the rest instead of internship and academic but I think I should highlight that more as you said. Thanks a lot !!

^that's a topic I know nothing about so can't offer much help. Your portfolio definitely showed a clear interest about that and seemed interesting, but I don't know anything about those programs or what they look for.

Thanks anyways! 

Hey! 

Check Upenn, sci-arch, columbia and maybe pratt as well. I am currently doing research at Upenn in a studio that focuses on computational geometry with Cecil Balmond. We mostly use Python and deal with advanced geometry, higher dimensions and some interesting topology concepts. I think you would like it and you would do great with your background.