• If you're going with intersecting lines through boxes, don't let it go through objects (last page as example). It makes them look like leftover layout guides.
• Don't use that thin font. It doesn't pair with whatever you 're using for the headers/titles.
• It might be the layout compensating for printing bleeds but some things look off-center.
• I don't think the grey bottom bar serves any purpose but it's your decision to keep or pull it.
• There is a lot of small text and plenty of usable white space that can be better utilized. If you expect or need people to read something, increase the size--they won't all have enormous monitors and be likely to zoom or squint for every word.

@bugsmetoo: Thanks for the advice! I'm somewhat partial to my font choices, but it's good to know what other people think. I agree with you about the small text part -- it was something I was worried and thinking about, but I also was concerned with overburdening the portfolio.

Also, happy holidays all!