It's a nice portfolio overall, except that I think you should include more projects. Seems to me you have only one design project and one research focused project you're showing.
Although I like the representation in page 13 and 14, a single word or phrase that explains each image in addition to the existing captions would be helpful.
Also a question from my side, what font are you using? The texts read nicely.
lacalr
Apr 18, 16 11:00 am
Just from a quick first glance is your numbering system off? The table of contents says "Personal Works" is three but you have it listed as 4 and at the end of your spreads. Sorry if this is something you already had noticed, but just haven't gotten around to fixing. Overall I think it looks great! But part of me wants to see projects 4 and 5 take on a whole spread each, they seem kind of crammed.
This is my folio first draft, any opinion on how i can improve it is appreciated.
https://issuu.com/khoidaonguyen/docs/folioop?e=2934303/30000297
It's a nice portfolio overall, except that I think you should include more projects. Seems to me you have only one design project and one research focused project you're showing.
Although I like the representation in page 13 and 14, a single word or phrase that explains each image in addition to the existing captions would be helpful.
Also a question from my side, what font are you using? The texts read nicely.
Just from a quick first glance is your numbering system off? The table of contents says "Personal Works" is three but you have it listed as 4 and at the end of your spreads. Sorry if this is something you already had noticed, but just haven't gotten around to fixing. Overall I think it looks great! But part of me wants to see projects 4 and 5 take on a whole spread each, they seem kind of crammed.