Hi. Im Alan a 5th year architecture student from Universidad de Buenos Aires (Argentina). Im interested in apply as an intern at big, cobe, and mvrdv. I need some critique for my portfolio.
pd: Sorry for the spanish, I will translate it soon
MinimalCrazy
Feb 29, 16 6:45 pm
Why include a photo in portfolio? Should let the employers judge you by your work. Giving a photo can lead to a possibility of employers being judgmental
pre-9: i cant understand your project through those diagrams
11: composition/layout isn't very good. Plans need detail either hatching or labels
13. lineweights!
15: layout??
Rest is okay.
Are you planning on applying to other firms as well?
p.s: dont take my criticism harshly, im just a student as well, working at one of those firms.
Clachecc91
Feb 29, 16 9:03 pm
I think your portfolio's great! And if you don't get hired because of your picture, it's only because you are way too beautiful :) Plus that's the Guggenheim, and everybody loves it.
PS: New York suits you
Alantelias
Feb 29, 16 9:57 pm
Thnak you Minimal Crazy for taking the time to review it. I will try to improve it. Which other firm do you think i should try? Where are you working?
Thank you Clachecc we can go out for a drink some day! jaja
Hi. Im Alan a 5th year architecture student from Universidad de Buenos Aires (Argentina). Im interested in apply as an intern at big, cobe, and mvrdv. I need some critique for my portfolio.
https://issuu.com/alantelias/docs/alan_telias_1
pd: Sorry for the spanish, I will translate it soon
Why include a photo in portfolio? Should let the employers judge you by your work. Giving a photo can lead to a possibility of employers being judgmental
pre-9: i cant understand your project through those diagrams
11: composition/layout isn't very good. Plans need detail either hatching or labels
13. lineweights!
15: layout??
Rest is okay.
Are you planning on applying to other firms as well?
p.s: dont take my criticism harshly, im just a student as well, working at one of those firms.
I think your portfolio's great! And if you don't get hired because of your picture, it's only because you are way too beautiful :) Plus that's the Guggenheim, and everybody loves it.
PS: New York suits you
Thnak you Minimal Crazy for taking the time to review it. I will try to improve it. Which other firm do you think i should try? Where are you working?
Thank you Clachecc we can go out for a drink some day! jaja