A few events recently have meant that a good amount of digital work has been lost and I will have to redo everything to be able to edit my portfolio. So I am getting back on my horse and would like some feedback. It's been awhile since I sat in a critique anyway so I guess it's time for a lumping. "The Table of Contents scanned in last by mistake, working on that" Also, thinking about getting rid of the page numbers and using the Golden Ration instead?
I am planning to apply to a MArch program and continue on in life, my back ground is A BFA- Historic Preservation from Savannah College of Art and Design. I hope to revamp my portfolio with some updated work as well, specifically "woodworking" with my last three tables. I"m also contemplating more building sketches that I am currently working on.
Any insight, constructive criticism would be much appreciated
well, it is beautiful the work you did, but the presentation is terrible... also, I feel that you don't really have a background in architecture or historic preservation from a college of art and design.. maybe "craftsmanship" Idk
JMK1
Nov 20, 15 5:41 pm
Thank you Zaina for the comment. I know, I was hoping it wasn't sooo bad that I couldn't use it for a base, the only reason I even have that is because I printed it out a while ago.
A complete overhaul is in order.
yea unfortunately, BFA HP from SCAD 03, Lacoste 02
enotnough
Nov 20, 15 6:38 pm
Hi there! Here are some comments I have:
-Is there a 10 page limit to the schools you are applying to? I think your portfolio would definitely benefit from having fewer/larger images on each page.
-I would take out the definitions - I don't think they add much, and the people on the admissions committee already know what Drawing,Painting,etc. mean...
-There is not a clear sense of organization in terms of image size and placement in your portfolio. It looks kind of like you just tried to fit everything in on each page. I think that having neat, thoughtful, well-designed layouts can go a long way.
Good luck!
Anonymoose
Nov 21, 15 9:22 am
@ambas
I fucking hope that's a joke. Either that, or you're really fucking stupid.
Hello,
A few events recently have meant that a good amount of digital work has been lost and I will have to redo everything to be able to edit my portfolio. So I am getting back on my horse and would like some feedback. It's been awhile since I sat in a critique anyway so I guess it's time for a lumping. "The Table of Contents scanned in last by mistake, working on that" Also, thinking about getting rid of the page numbers and using the Golden Ration instead?
I am planning to apply to a MArch program and continue on in life, my back ground is A BFA- Historic Preservation from Savannah College of Art and Design. I hope to revamp my portfolio with some updated work as well, specifically "woodworking" with my last three tables. I"m also contemplating more building sketches that I am currently working on.
Any insight, constructive criticism would be much appreciated
My portfolio as "DRAFT"
My Website "AS IS"
Thank you all in advance
Cheers
well, it is beautiful the work you did, but the presentation is terrible... also, I feel that you don't really have a background in architecture or historic preservation from a college of art and design.. maybe "craftsmanship" Idk
Thank you Zaina for the comment. I know, I was hoping it wasn't sooo bad that I couldn't use it for a base, the only reason I even have that is because I printed it out a while ago.
A complete overhaul is in order.
yea unfortunately, BFA HP from SCAD 03, Lacoste 02
Hi there! Here are some comments I have:
-Is there a 10 page limit to the schools you are applying to? I think your portfolio would definitely benefit from having fewer/larger images on each page.
-I would take out the definitions - I don't think they add much, and the people on the admissions committee already know what Drawing,Painting,etc. mean...
-There is not a clear sense of organization in terms of image size and placement in your portfolio. It looks kind of like you just tried to fit everything in on each page. I think that having neat, thoughtful, well-designed layouts can go a long way.
Good luck!
@ambas
I fucking hope that's a joke. Either that, or you're really fucking stupid.